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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Please modify my sentences

Please advise one pc missing good in which carton no. to us for the customer.




As per your agreement, we noticed you will absorb 8 pcs missing goods in the last shipment. Please find attached invoice for your payment. Also, Please take a photo to show us the shipping mark in good condition after make the amendment.

  

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Hi, Here are a few comments. You seem to be asking us to correct all the English emails that you write in your shipping office. I assume you get paid for doing this, but we don't.

  • Hi, Here are a few comments.
  • You seem to be asking us to correct all the English emails that you write in your shipping office.
  • I assume you get paid for doing this, but we don't.
  • Yet you never thank us,except for the times that I remind you that you never say 'thank you'.
  • You never seem to learn from our corrections.
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Hi,



Here are a few comments.



You seem to be asking us to correct all the English emails that you write in your shipping office.



I assume you get paid for doing this, but we don't. Yet you never thank us,except for the times that I remind you that you never say 'thank you'.



You never seem to learn from our corrections. Yo

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