Please mark my IELTS essay, thanks you: Parents are the best teacher

Parents are the best teacher

Children need education from both of their parents and school. Two together have equally important roles and lacking one will lead to children group up without either knowledge or personality.

In term of theoretical and academic knowledge, schools always are the best place to study. They have up-to-date technologies and efficiency new teaching method. Sometimes, parents look after their children too much but with the age gap, they could not fully understand their children and this could become the negative effect on their emotional role friendship. Meanwhile, teachers who have been trained professionally could overcome this gap and become closer to their students. Furthermore, sometimes parent choice to ignore the bad habits of their child or they just became used to it, in this case, teachers with the neutral position, become more efficiency judgment.

On the other hand, parents are the very first teacher since we were born. Not only they feed us, but they also try to show us the way, which base on their life experience, that is the best way for our life. Neither that way is right or wrong it still came from their life. And unlike the education that school gives us could be an interruption, parents teaching following us none stop through the life. Another point that because parent looks after their child all the time, it is clear that they could notice all of their's child weakness which school cannot see. Of course, there are no perfect parents in the world, yet, the love that parents give for their child always perfect.

In conclusion, meanwhile school teaches children about knowledge, parents build up their child personality and responsibility. Lacking one and children could easily be lost on their own and sadly, turn in to criminal.