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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Please make this read as natural as possible

Hi teachers. Please make this read as natural as possible:

He tried an oyster at the buffet and liked it, so he fished quite a few more onto a plate and went to a table.

  

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I don't like "fished onto". You fish things out. I don't know what visual you want, so I hestitate to guess, but he might scoop, slap, ladle, spoon, shovel, dump, sneak, put or place them.

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  • I don't like "fished onto".
  • You fish things out.
  • I don't know what visual you want, so I hestitate to guess, but he might scoop, slap, ladle, spoon, shovel, dump, sneak, put or place them.
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I don't like "fished onto". You fish things out. I don't know what visual you want, so I hestitate to guess, but he might scoop, slap, ladle, spoon, shovel, dump, sneak, put or place them.

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