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Alc24 Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Please make this natural teacher

Please make this natural.
Let say you are carring someone's bag. You aren't carrying it properly.
The person says "Don't carry it like that, use both straps and put it on both shoulders" you say:

Are you saying that for your bag or my back. Are you scared for you bag or scared that I'll hurt my back carrying it the way I am?

Thank you
  

Top answer

The language is perfectly natural. Good job. ".

— Enoon

  • The language is perfectly natural.
  • Good job.
  • ".
  • I assume "carring" is a typo; it's "carrying".
  • Your punctuation is not so good, though.
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The language is perfectly natural. Good job. One mistake—it should be "Let's say ...". I assume "carring" is a typo; it's "carrying". Your punctuation is not so good, though.
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Many thanks

Which is better? Would I say both sentences in the situation? Is there anything you would add or correct?
Are you saying that for your bag or my back.
Are you scared for you bag or scared that I'll hurt my back carrying it the way I am?

Could I ask you if you could help me with this thread, I can't seem to spot any mistakes.

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alc24Which is better? Would I say both sentences in the situation? Is there anything you would add or correct?Are you saying that for your bag or my back.Are you scared for you bag or scared that I'll hurt my back carrying it the way I am?
You could say either sentence, but not both (if you correct the missing question mark and make "you bag" "your bag"). They
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