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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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We have clear defined Target for the year 2012 (100000 TEUs & 110000 Tons ) and to achieve that we will focusing on some measures. Many of them are to be the new initiatives this year and some we will be reviving in due course. Mainly we can figure out below measures which can give us very good result in the coming time -
  

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We have a clearly defined target of 100000 TEUs and 110000 Tons for the year 2012. `To achieve that, we will be focusing on some new initiatives this year, and some measures we will be reviving in due course. Mainly we can figure out below measures which can give us very good result in the coming time - I realize there are 'some measures' you then quote, but I don't understand this sentence in order to suggest wording.

  • We have a clearly defined target of 100000 TEUs and 110000 Tons for the year 2012.
  • `To achieve that, we will be focusing on some new initiatives this year, and some measures we will be reviving in due course.
  • Mainly we can figure out below measures which can give us very good result in the coming time - I realize there are 'some measures' you then quote, but I don't understand this sentence in order to suggest wording.
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We have a clearly defined target of 100000 TEUs and 110000 Tons for the year 2012. `To achieve that, we will be focusing on some new initiatives this year, and some measures we will be reviving in due course.

Mainly we can figure out below measures which can give us very good result in the coming time -

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