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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
Grammar

Please make the joke funnier with your better grammar

Monkey opened an exclusive shop of female fashion (selling dress). She hired giraffe as a model to show off neckerchiefs colorful and fashionable. The giraffe's show attracted many animals to watch, getting lots of cheerings.

At that moment, milk cow pushed its way to the front of the crowd, saying to the monkey:"I want to be a model, too."

The crowd burst into laughter.

The milk cow responded:"What are you laughing at? Sister monkey has imported a set of embroidered bras that will arrive tomorrow!"
  

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It's going to take more than better grammar to make this funny in English, Jobb-- humour rarely translates well. As far as cosmetic repairs, however: 'A monkey opened an exclusive boutique. She hired a giraffe to model the scarves and neckerchiefs, which attracted many delighted customers.

  • It's going to take more than better grammar to make this funny in English, Jobb-- humour rarely translates well.
  • As far as cosmetic repairs, however: 'A monkey opened an exclusive boutique.
  • She hired a giraffe to model the scarves and neckerchiefs, which attracted many delighted customers.
  • " The crowd burst into laughter, but the cow replied, "What are you laughing at?
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It's going to take more than better grammar to make this funny in English, Jobb-- humour rarely translates well.

As far as cosmetic repairs, however:

'A monkey opened an exclusive boutique. She hired a giraffe to model the scarves and neckerchiefs, which attracted many delighted customers.

A cow pushed its way to the front of the crowd, saying to the monkey, "I want
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Hi, Jobb. Emotion: smile

For what it's worth, your joke made me laugh. I'm not a native speaker of English, though.

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