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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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I can feel it if I can leave early or not. Today I feel if I ask to leave early, my boss will say no.
I can feel it if I can leave early or not. Today I feel if I ask to leave early, my boss will say no.
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The first sentence is awkward. I'd make it all one sentence. If I ask to leave early today, my boss will say no; I can feel it.
- The first sentence is awkward.
- I'd make it all one sentence.
- If I ask to leave early today, my boss will say no; I can feel it.
- I have a feeling that if I ask to leave early today my boss will say no.
- Your second sentence works, too.
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The first sentence is awkward. I'd make it all one sentence.
If I ask to leave early today, my boss will say no; I can feel it.
I have a feeling that if I ask to leave early today my boss will say no.
Your second sentence works, too.
Today I feel if I ask to leave early, my boss will say no.
If I ask to leave early today, my boss will say no; I can feel it.
I have a feeling that if I ask to leave early today my boss will say no.
Your second sentence works, too.
Today I feel if I ask to leave early, my boss will say no.
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