0
Aastha Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing

Please make it a bit professional

Sir,
I’ve received a Show Cause Notice regarding the APMVT tax levied on my car.
(Vehicle : ...............Vehicle No : ..........) which belongs to Delhi.


1.I am a Software Consultant and I will have to travel across the country for consultation job. On 10th of July also I came to S— for consultation and I keep on coming and going for small trips to S—.

2.On 24th July when My vehicle was caught by Inspector I was taking my son to the hospital as he was seriously ill. I was not in a hurry and was not in the perfect state of mind so, I wrote whatever was dictated to me by the Inspector.

3.The house (address) provided to me by the company belongs to Mr. X and there is an agreement between the company and Mr. X.

4.I am a permanent resident of Delhi. Proof of which is attached (Ration Card).

5.I still carry Reliance Number of Delhi and bearing the cost of roaming as I’ve no plans to stay permanent in S—.



Names of persons/places edited out by MrP.
  

Top answer

Here are my emendations as I understand your message, Aastha, and I am moving the post to the Letter Writing forum: Sir, I have received a Show Cause Notice regarding the APMVT tax levied on my car. ) which is registered in Delhi. 1.

  • Here are my emendations as I understand your message, Aastha, and I am moving the post to the Letter Writing forum: Sir, I have received a Show Cause Notice regarding the APMVT tax levied on my car.
  • ) which is registered in Delhi.
  • 1.
  • I am a software consultant and must travel extensively for consultations.
  • On the 10th of July I travelled to S— for consultation and I subsequently continued commuting to S—.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0
Here are my emendations as I understand your message, Aastha, and I am moving the post to the Letter Writing forum:

Sir,

I have received a Show Cause Notice regarding the APMVT tax levied on my car.
(Vehicle : ...............Vehicle No : ..........) which is registered in Delhi.


1. I am a software consultant and must travel extensively for consultations. On
0
Thanks a lot.

It really helped me.

Thanks again

Related Questions