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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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Please make edits/corrections to the following paragraph: ...Charlton H...

Please make edits/corrections to the following paragraph:

If you have seen Ben Hur which starred Charlton Heston, then possibly you would be able to help me. When the overture is played, there we see just a part of a certain painting where two arms stretched towards each other. I believe full painting is shown during entr'acte. Would you please let me know about that painting? I have seen that painting somewhere and I believe it's some kind of religious painting. Thanks.
  

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Hi, If you have seen Ben Hur, which starred Charlton Heston, then possibly you can help me. At the beginning, we see just a part of a certain painting where two arms are stretched towards each other. I believe the full painting is shown during the intermission.

— Clive

  • Hi, If you have seen Ben Hur, which starred Charlton Heston, then possibly you can help me.
  • At the beginning, we see just a part of a certain painting where two arms are stretched towards each other.
  • I believe the full painting is shown during the intermission.
  • Would you please tell me the name of that painting?
  • I have seen it somewhere and I believe it's some kind of religious one.
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Hi,

If you have seen Ben Hur, which starred Charlton Heston, then possibly you can help me. At the beginning, we see just a part of a certain painting where two arms are stretched towards each other. I believe the full painting is shown during the intermission. Would you please tell me the name of that painting? I have seen it somewhere and I believe it's some kind o
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Thanks, Clive.

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