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Jackson6612 Posted 19 years ago
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Please make corrections/edits to the following paragraphs.

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00I know it does not seem nice to ask you for this favour, but I have no one else to ask for this. If you could not do that, then there is nothing to worry about. I need some information from X University. I cannot speak English, so if I tell you my problem then would you call X and ask them few questions?02br
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00That's very kind of you. Phone number to be called is 123456. On this page you can find additional information. I think programme I am inquiring about is called 01i00Y Course02i00. Please ask them these questions:02br
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01b001:02b00 Are they still offering this programme?02br
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01b002:02b00 Can international students also apply for this programme?02br
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01b003:02b00 Can one get admission into Electrical Engineering Programme of X University after completing that Y Course?02br
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01b004:02b00 If they have stopped offering that Y course, then please ask them about any other university which is offering such a programme?02br
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00I'm extremely grateful for your this favour.02br
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00Thank you very much. You are a very kind person. Please remember to ask all those questions, because answers to those questions can change someone's life.02br
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00Thanks a lot. I hope they pick up the phone in this year.02br
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00I have emailed them two weeks ago, when I asked you to call them. They didn't reply to that email. Try to call them one or two times, if they don't answer, forget it. It's okay then. Thanks a lot for taking so much trouble of calling them repeatedly.0-
  

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