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Chang Posted 17 years ago
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I know this awesome site to upload pictures. It allows you to upload multiple files at a time. I do have an existing account with them. Use it to upload Aidan's photos. My id is ___ and password is ______. When you're done let me know. I would love to see all his pictures. Bye for now and take care. thanks.,
  

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As an informal note to a friend, I really don't see many problems with this (if it was a formal letter then it would be a different matter). A couple of minor suggestions: I know this awesome site where you can upload pictures. It allows you to upload multiple files at a time.

— Mr Wordy

  • As an informal note to a friend, I really don't see many problems with this (if it was a formal letter then it would be a different matter).
  • A couple of minor suggestions: I know this awesome site where you can upload pictures.
  • It allows you to upload multiple files at a time.
  • I do have an existing account with them.
  • Use it to upload Aidan's photos.
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As an informal note to a friend, I really don't see many problems with this (if it was a formal letter then it would be a different matter). A couple of minor suggestions:

I know this awesome site where you can upload pictures. It allows you to upload multiple files at a time. I do have an existing account with them. Use it to upload Aidan's photos. My id is __ and my passw
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