Please look over these sentences. ive tried hard to correct them please

Could you please tell me what you think of my corrections please?

- The pokemon mode trend has past. People are no longer into that.
- How are you supposed to gain/get experience if no one is willing to give you a job.
- She made more money off of me than what the product was worth. OK
- If one one the next 3 songs that comeS on the tv is this song, I'll give you 10 dollars.
- Why drive something other than a nissan when you can drive a nissan just that.
- There is a bus replacement for the subway that's not running from station x to y. I don't know
- I have 2 times as much as usual./It's more expensive than 100 dollars. both ok
- Be happy that we have food on the table. Be grateful. ok
- Does the bank know when someone has tried to withdraw some money and wasn't able to due to insufficient funds. Is there a trace of that transaction. I don't know
- It needs to be stated in the police report which/what bank the person went to to withdraw the money.
- He's going to be a fugitive for/in all of season 2. I don't know how he's going to get on the polices good side./good graces. (tv show) ALL I think
- They've been given standing orders to launch the atack if any activity was/is to be detected.
- You're not scared of your mom the way you are your dad. OK
- Maybe he has had only been gone 10 minnutes when you arrived.
- A soldering iron if, in contact with skin can give you a 3rd degree burn. OK
- Can you tell me if there are any other positions available other than this one. OK

Thank you