PLEASE let me know if my correction are good, I've tried hard

I've tried my best correcting these sentence. Could you please help me with them as I'd like to know if my corrects are good.

- Like/as he had said, she arrived 10 minutes early. OK BOTH

- Get on (at) the back of the train. AT
- She's missed a lot of vaccines/vaccination shots. Don't know

- Stop making me/getting me to move seats. BOTH

- I'm dead/I die once I get into the subway. (figuratively ) One's an adj one's a verb

- I won't be living too far from work. I'll be 2 stations (away) from work. AWAY optional

- The train didn't pull out in time to see what happened/for me to see what had happened. BOTH second one states that you wanted to see what had happened.

- A white car gets dirty/dirties quickly, quicker than other color(ed) cars. BOTH & colored

- You know I haven't slept when I'm so tired i can't keep my eyes open. OK

- The elevator door makes a lot of noises when it closes. OK

- I have a hard time knowing whether essays are nicely written. OK
- The color that most resembles this one is.../that resembles this one most is... BOTH
- You're not going to put someone up and in exchange be mean to them for being there.
- I can't spend 1000 dollars on shoes when my mom needs the money.

Thank you