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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Please let me know if everything is correct?

I bolded the parts of doubts


a forth one in the way, or a forth one is on the way?

I was injured by fire from our forces- is that correct?

and the rest that are bolded.. thanks

I'm married and a Father of three children And a forth one in the way. I was injured by fire from our forces.

From a whole and healthy man, I turned to a man with disabilities I was severely hit. Got burnt, and was left with shreds all over my body and PTSD. Sadly, my financial state is poor and i’m in debt.

Any help I could get that will help me live with my family in dignity, will be kindly appreciated,

  

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I'm a married father of three children with a fourth on the way. I was injured by fire from our forces. I was severely hit, burnt, and left with shreds all over my body and PTSD.

  • I'm a married father of three children with a fourth on the way.
  • I was injured by fire from our forces.
  • I was severely hit, burnt, and left with shreds all over my body and PTSD.
  • Sadly, my financial state is poor and I'm in debt.
  • " Do you mean injuries, scars?
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I'm a married father of three children with a fourth on the way. I was injured by fire from our forces.

Formerly a whole and healthy man, I became a man with disabilities .I was severely hit, burnt, and left with shreds all over my body and PTSD. Sadly, my financial state is poor and I'm in debt.

I don't know what you mean by "shreds." Do you mean injuries, scars? I kind of rewr

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