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Ionetworld Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Please let me know all of my grammar mistakes in the next paragraph!

"I read this book like 5 years ago and decided to start investing and try to create some business. So today I'm only focusing in traveling a lot and creating music while keeping up with the work!"
  

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Hello, ionetworld—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. ionetworld Please let me know all of my grammar mistakes in the next paragraph!

— Mister Micawber

  • Hello, ionetworld—and welcome to English Forums.
  • Thank you for registering as a member.
  • ionetworld Please let me know all of my grammar mistakes in the next paragraph!
  • That is not really big enough to be called a paragraph, but here's a corrected version: I read this book about 5 years ago and decided to start investing ways to create some business.
  • Today, I'm focusing only on traveling a lot and creating music while continuing that effort.
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Hello, ionetworld—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.
ionetworld Please let me know all of my grammar mistakes in the next paragraph!
That is not really big enough to be called a paragraph, but here's a corrected version:

I read this book about 5 years ago and decided to start investing ways to create s
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