Please kindly review my paragraph: Moving away from home

Moving away from home

Moving away from home can be a stressful experience for young people. They may face many difficulties, especially at the beginning period. Young people have to learn how to adapt to a new neighborhood when they living far from their families. For example, a young person living in a shared room or a shared apartment has to get used to the presence of other people who come from different areas with different cultures or lifestyles. Moreover, financial management is a challenging task for young people when they move away from home. For instance, some of my friends told me that they used to buy a lot of stuff things such as video games and mangas by the amount of money that should be utilized to buy learning materials, so some of them did not get good scores at that semester because of lacking the materials for learning. Living far from home can be a challenging period for young people.