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Fibechola24 Posted 8 years ago
Letter Writing

Please kindly review my letter of motivation. Not morethan 1000 characters

I’m writing to express my interest in applying for a master degree in GGNB Neuroscience st­arting in winter 2018. I believe my educational background would enable me to make a stron­g contribution at the university.
During my study I offered courses such as Biology, microbiology and Biochemistry. These co­urses have helped laid a good foundation for me to study Neuroscience at masters’ level.
I have always had a strong passion and desire to know the biochemistry, anatomy, physiolog­y, molecular biology of nerves and nervous tissues and their relation to learning and beha­viour.
My academic performance has always been top of the class. I would like to continue my stu­dies in order to gain knowledge and experience by academic research and I believe a Master­ Degree Programme in Neuroscience would offer me the possibility of receiving the complete­ picture of all aspects of this field.
  

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You know that you have less than 150 words here. It's not a very compelling story. I have highlighted some grammatical errors.

  • You know that you have less than 150 words here.
  • It's not a very compelling story.
  • I have highlighted some grammatical errors.
  • I’m writing to express my interest in applying for a master degree in GGNB Neuroscience st ­arting in winter 2018.
  • I believe my educational background would enable me to make a stron ­g contribution at the university.
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You know that you have less than 150 words here. It's not a very compelling story. I have highlighted some grammatical errors.


I’m writing to express my interest in applying for a master degree in GGNB Neuroscience st­arting in winter 2018. I believe my educational background would enable me to make a stron­g contrib

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