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Topic: It is thought by some that it is better to live in the city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people believe that living in urban areas is better than living in rural areas, while many have the opposite opinion. In my way of thinking, it depends on people’s interests.

On the one hand, life in the city has some certain benefits. Firstly, we can enjoy the newest and the most modern things in the city. We have an excellent education, moreover, there is also a lot of entertainment. If we live in the cities, we will have more job opportunities than when we live in the countryside because there are many companies and factories in urban areas. For example, many foreign investors set up factories and companies in the cities in Vietnam so people live in the cities can have more job chances. Secondly, we have better facility health system because there are a lot of hospitals with qualified doctors and nurses. Furthermore, we are always well cared for by the local medical team and are routinely vaccinated.

On the other hand, living in the countryside also has advantages. First of all, there are not many noises than we live in the city. In rural areas, we are peaceful because there is nobody can bother us. The countryside is often quiet so it helps us stay away from the noise in the city, immerse ourselves in nature. For example, in the summer I often travel to the countryside and I feel comfortable about peace and immerse myself in nature. Secondly, in the countryside, the atmosphere is clearer and the environment is less polluted than in the cities. There is no city mog, fewer cars, and fewer people.

In conclusion, living in the city or the countryside also have own benefits. Therefore, the choice to live in anywhere depends on individuals because of their private interests and demand.