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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The modern world wittnesses a massive number of technologies announced daily; however, computers are still maintained to be the most significant devices throughout the last century. From my perspective, computers are truly the most essential part of our lives.

It cannot be denied that the release of computers marked a new industrial revolution. This period spawned amazing software systems which are able to help humans to plan, schedule works in an extremely effective way. In today's world, computer systems still remain a major role in our lives. This incredible invention not only helps for human to manage their works but also completes a numerous figure of work tasks. For example, the birth of Microsoft Windows, the most popular operating system with a huge number of software applications (such as Word and Powerpoint) bring students and officers extraordinary work experience. Moreover, the undertaking work of computers also highly appreciated because of the ability to entertain users with massive libraries of games, music and films. In company with the development of the internet, computers increasingly become unable to be indispensable to humans daily activities.

The importance of computers not only exists in human personal daily basis but also shown in various public necessities. Thanks to the popularity of computers as well as the capacity of accessing the internet, looking up and spreading information have became faster than ever. For instance, Vietnam, a country with a raising number of populations who can own personal computer and access the internet, now can easily broadcast alarming issues about Covid-19 pandamic. Therefore, even in a developing nation, people are totally able to capture information about the pandemic and perceive preventative measures timely.

To sum up, among tons of amazing inventions of the last 100 years, computers still contain the major role and it is believed to be a steady foundation of many mighty iventions in the future.

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The modern world wittnesses a massive number of technologies announced daily; (That is really hyperbole and incorrect. Large numbers of new versions or products may be announced every day, but a new technology rarely is announced.) however, computers are still maintained to be the most significant devices (wrong word.) throughout the last century. From my perspective, computers are truly the most essential part of our lives. (Maybe that is true, but you did not answer the question. The examiner expects you to clear answer the essay prompt, To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Do you partially agree, completely agree, agree with reservations, or disagree?

Think about it. Are computers more important than automobiles, the manufacturing assembly line, airplanes, television, radio, nuclear energy, the jet engine, plastic, the elevator - which allowed tall buildings to be feasible - and air conditioning? What about satellites, the motion picture, color film, the transistor and integrated circuits, digital cameras, solar energy, the internet and cell phones? All of those have been invented in the 1900s.)

It cannot be denied that the release of (wrong word.) computers marked a new industrial revolution. This period spawned amazing software systems which are able to help humans to plan, schedule works (wrong form) in an extremely effective way. In today's world, computer systems still remain (wrong word.) a major role in our lives. This incredible invention not only helps for human (wrong word.) to manage their works but also completes a numerous figure (wrong word.) of ~~work~~ tasks. For example, the ~~birth~~ first release of Microsoft Windows, the most popular operating system with a huge number of software applications (such as Word and Powerpoint) bring students and officers (police or military?) extraordinary work experience. Moreover, the undertaking work of computers also highly appreciated because of the ability to entertain users with massive libraries of games, music and films. In company with the development of the internet, computers increasingly become unable to be indispensable (The double negative changes the meaning, in a bad way.) to humans (wrong word.) daily activities.

The importance of computers not only exists in human (wrong word.) personal daily basis (wrong word.) but also shown in various public necessities. Thanks to the popularity of computers as well as the capacity of accessing the internet, looking up and spreading information have became faster than ever. For instance, Vietnam, a country with a raising (wrong word.) number of populations (wrong word.) who can own personal computer and access the internet, now can easily broadcast alarming issues (wrong word.) informative news and warnings about Covid-19 pandamic. Therefore, even in a developing nation, people are totally able to capture information about the pandemic and perceive (wrong word.) preventative measures timely.

To sum up, among the tons of amazing inventions of the last 100 years, computers still contain (wrong word.) the major role and it is believed to be a steady foundation of many mighty (wrong word.) iventions in the future.

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