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Penelope.W Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing

Please kindly help me to correct the letter



I would like to thank all my XX colleagues after having my training in XX. It was a fruitful training. Would you please help me to correct the following letter? Thank you.




Dear all,



Thank you all for providing Luke and me a fruitful training. The training was well organized and the experienced professors gave the courses lively. After the training, I have a better view on XX industry, the structure of our company, our resources and XX service. I really enjoyed myself during the training; you are all very kind for me. I will do my best not to disappoint you and be an asset for our company.




Thanks & Best regards



Penelope
  

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Hi Penelope-- welcome to English Forums. Dear all, Thank you all for providing Luke and me a fruitful training. The program was well organized and the experienced professors made the courses lively.

— Mister Micawber

  • Hi Penelope-- welcome to English Forums.
  • Dear all, Thank you all for providing Luke and me a fruitful training.
  • The program was well organized and the experienced professors made the courses lively.
  • After the training, I have a better view of the *** industry, the structure of our company, and our resources and *** service.
  • I really enjoyed myself during the experience ; you were all very kind to me.
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Hi Penelope-- welcome to English Forums.


Dear all,

Thank you all for providing Luke and me a fruitful training. The program was well organized and the experienced professors made the courses lively. After the training, I have a better view of the *** industry, the structure of our company, and our resources and *** service. I really enjoyed myself d
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hi my dear mom, how are you? hope u r keeping well. hope is your life going on? how is your preaching in nepal?hope u r feeling satisfaction by preaching in nepal.i am very happy to hear all the news of u from anirban. you r really enjoying a lot by keeping serving to jah always.this is what i feel very much encouragement from u. pl keep it up always. perhaps it is your seed in nepal, that is what
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Hello,

Firstly go through and fix the sloppy stuff and then we'll take a proper look. If you want to improve your English then you have to write in English not 'text'. Fix these and re-post

You not u

I not i

are not r

please not pl

etc etc etc

Also, you should use a capital letter at the start of all sentences and for proper nouns, lik
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Welcome to English Forums, Varun.

Yes, as Nona says, please review your letter yourself first, to repair the simpler errors.
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