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Debangkok Posted 17 years ago
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Please kindly help me revise my cover letter
I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing.
Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
111/33
bkk
HR Department
ABB Company
bkk
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply for the marketing Executive position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com.
I graduated from HK University and hold a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chiness Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship.I have learned a real business, including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department store.
In addition, marketing is my interest. I have learned a great deal about marketing methodologies through reading various marketing books. I am able to implement a marketing plan.
I believe that my experience, commercial sense and analytical skill would make me a excellent candidates.
An opportunity to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can help your company would be most welcome. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you.
Yours faithfully,
Enclosure: Resume
Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
111/33
bkk
HR Department
ABB Company
bkk
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to apply for the marketing Executive position in response to your advertisement in Jobsdb.com.
I graduated from HK University and hold a bachelors degree from the faculty of Economics, with a major in Business Economics. I then challenged myself with my own Chiness Food business. This gave me a great opportunity to enhance my entrepreneurship.I have learned a real business, including marketing and sales, problem solving and dealing with department store.
In addition, marketing is my interest. I have learned a great deal about marketing methodologies through reading various marketing books. I am able to implement a marketing plan.
I believe that my experience, commercial sense and analytical skill would make me a excellent candidates.
An opportunity to discuss my abilities and skills and how I can help your company would be most welcome. I appreciate your consideration and look forward to meeting you.
Yours faithfully,
Enclosure: Resume
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Hi, Here are some edits. Good luck, Clive I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing. Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
- Hi, Here are some edits.
- Good luck, Clive I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing.
- Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
- 111/33 bkk put your address and the the date in the top right corner HR Department ABB Company bkk Dear Sir, Try to get a name.
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Hi,
Here are some edits.
Good luck, Clive
I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing.
Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
111/33
bkk
Here are some edits.
Good luck, Clive
I would like to apply a job in marketing field but I did not finish directly in marketing but I have some knowledge of marketing.
Pleases help me about these,your all suggestion is a valuable.
111/33
bkk
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