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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take

Dear John,
I wanted to let you know that I have got your unpleasant feedback about unexpected sounds from my home. The reason I wanted recognized my fault to let some noisy bother surroundings, I would like to say sorry about that and I promised the same situation will never happened...

I have been had a gathering party from my relative for long term not met, So that is the one of these reason make some noises to local neighbor and you. Then, we have a karaoke competition with maximum volume during everyone had drunk. I wish I could control myself in this time to sorry happened things like this.

I want to say sorry about things were occurred and want to invite your hang out with me to drink some cup of coffee and hope you accept my apologies and then give you some cinema tickets.

I will make sure that the noises will not occur from my home anymore, if I have some gathering party without karaoke contest so I will send to you a notification at least seven days to notice you. That thing will useful to you when you have time to prepare or you have plan to hang out with other friends of yours.

I home you agree with my suggestion. Let me know when you can come tonight and hangout with me.

Your truly,
Issac