Please, kindly ask you to review my second attempt of CL for internship

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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00I am applying to a three-month internship within the private wealth management division that was listed through the Newsletter Stage & Placement of -----University. The opportunity presented in this listing is very appealing to me, since COMPANY is one of the world's top investment banks that offers ongoing training throughout the career and have fast paced, demanding working culture that, from my point of view, can be at the same time highly stimulating and enriching. These characteristics perfectly fit my expectations about the starting point of my career in the field of global financial markets for which I have strong enthusiasm. 02br
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00Holding a Bachelor’s Degree in International Economics of ----- State University, I have pursued my studies at ----- University specializing on Business Administration in order to extend my knowledge of present-day business practices and techniques. Shortly after I have mastered finance related courses offered in the University I discovered my strong interest in the investment banking and started to search opportunities to supplement my theoretical background with practical experience through an internship. Furthermore, I am highly motivated to learn in particular the private wealth management within you company, since COMPANY has the superior reputation in asset management and also is presented in my home country. Upon graduation I would like to pursue my career being the part of your private banking division in order to expand this service in rapidly growing market of COUNTRY.02br
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00Two above-mentioned degree courses have given me strong quantitative and analytical skills, made me familiar with financial and managerial accounting, equity markets, corporate finance, basics of law and financial mathematics. These academic studies will naturally enable me to use not only my interest in working with financial instruments but also my knowledge in business and finance. 02br
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00Apart from that, my significant business experience in banking institutions, trading and producing companies has taught me to think creatively for solving complex problems, to learn quickly, to pay attention to details, and to develop entrepreneurial spirit. For instance, during my penultimate internship I was in charge of developing a business-plan for a company in order to receive a loan of EUR SUM in one of the largest banking institution of COUNTRY, which has eventually proved to be successful. While accomplishing the project I have executed several researches, prepared marketing strategy and made the financial analysis. Taking in account the assignments of the position offered this experience makes me a very suitable candidate for it.02br
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00Finally, I truly believe that my ability to be an outgoing communicator and effective team-player will be essential skills for being successful at COMPANY. I am eager to take up challenges in fast moving and stimulating high-pressure environment that offers your company. 02br
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00For your further information I enclose my curriculum vitae and will be available for an interview at your convenience. Hoping that you will consider my application favorably, I look forward to hearing from you soon.02br
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00Sincerely,02br
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00Enclosure: Curriculum Vitae0-