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AdityaMookerjee Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please judge my paragraph.
I am currently reading 'The Oxford Essential Guide to Writing' written by Mr Thomas S. Kane. I was asked to practice writing a paragraph of about 100-200 words, when reading the book. Before I began writing, I was asked to think about possible strategies of organization and tone. After I had written the paragraph, I was asked to compose sentences on the strategies of organization and tone, which I had exercised, or used. Please read my paragraph, and the strategy which went into the writing, and please give your your opinion.
How Humans Motivate Themselves to Interact With Each Other.
Before we can attempt to consider how humans motivate themselves to interact with each other, we should consider the term motivation. What is motivation? Different people find different reasons for the motivation of their actions. Perhaps, basically, the origin of all motivation is unknown, but we give motive to our origin of our motivation. How do we motivate ourselves to interact with other humans? Perhaps, we consider the circumstances and, since motivation is unknown in it's origin, as perhaps understood my earlier assumption in the essay, after we consider the circumstances, the motivation to interaction, and interaction itself, happen on their own accord.
Strategy that went into the writing.
I did not aim for a particular tone, as I did not assume to know what the result of my thought would be. I used my thought to search my mind for the obvious, and not to search for that which required effort, and thus, was not obvious. I targetted a general audience for my paragraph. I assumed that I was writing for the audience, which included myself. My tone reflected my interest in the subject, and was neither formal, nor informal, in intent, and I did not want to present myself to my audience in any particular manner.
The strategy which I have written, as used by myself, is interesting to me, after I have read it. I have made mistakes in my paragraph, which is also interesting to me. Please judge my paragraph.
How Humans Motivate Themselves to Interact With Each Other.
Before we can attempt to consider how humans motivate themselves to interact with each other, we should consider the term motivation. What is motivation? Different people find different reasons for the motivation of their actions. Perhaps, basically, the origin of all motivation is unknown, but we give motive to our origin of our motivation. How do we motivate ourselves to interact with other humans? Perhaps, we consider the circumstances and, since motivation is unknown in it's origin, as perhaps understood my earlier assumption in the essay, after we consider the circumstances, the motivation to interaction, and interaction itself, happen on their own accord.
Strategy that went into the writing.
I did not aim for a particular tone, as I did not assume to know what the result of my thought would be. I used my thought to search my mind for the obvious, and not to search for that which required effort, and thus, was not obvious. I targetted a general audience for my paragraph. I assumed that I was writing for the audience, which included myself. My tone reflected my interest in the subject, and was neither formal, nor informal, in intent, and I did not want to present myself to my audience in any particular manner.
The strategy which I have written, as used by myself, is interesting to me, after I have read it. I have made mistakes in my paragraph, which is also interesting to me. Please judge my paragraph.
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