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Mcgagliardi Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please... Is this version better?
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Is it better if I dedicate my writing with these words???
To my dear friends, who always encouraged me, and, to my loved ones, who guided my steps from above.
Thanks.
Ma. del Carmen
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Is it better if I dedicate my writing with these words???
To my dear friends, who always encouraged me, and, to my loved ones, who guided my steps from above.
Thanks.
Ma. del Carmen
___________________________
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It is fine (if you lose one comma), but it might be nicer to cast it in present perfect: To my dear friends, who have always encouraged me, and to my loved ones, who have guided my steps from above.
- It is fine (if you lose one comma), but it might be nicer to cast it in present perfect: To my dear friends, who have always encouraged me, and to my loved ones, who have guided my steps from above.
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It is fine (if you lose one comma), but it might be nicer to cast it in present perfect:
To my dear friends, who have always encouraged me, and to my loved ones, who have guided my steps from above.
To my dear friends, who have always encouraged me, and to my loved ones, who have guided my steps from above.
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