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Sarah_92 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Please improve/correct this section. *confusion with past tense verbs* etc.
When he screams, does it make sense when i write upon? and were it says frolicked, is it the write tense?
Please woudl you check/improve it for me:
Before I sat down again, I went to grab a book from the book shelf which was in the front room, as I reached for the book ‘Great Expectations’ by Charles Dickens which was a part of my school assignment for my upcoming literature examination. Upon hearing a scream coming from the garden, abruptly I felt a cold shudder running down my spine. I pounced up and rushed outside and opened the garden door. It was Chris. “Phew” I signed with relief as he was I saw Chris laughing hysterically whilst he frolicked about by jumping up and down in the brownish puddles of rain. Seeing me, he splashed water directly at me; the spray hit my face leaving tiny droplets on my lips. The heavy downpour was now accompanied by a very strong wind which started to lift my hair.
Thankyou,
Please woudl you check/improve it for me:
Before I sat down again, I went to grab a book from the book shelf which was in the front room, as I reached for the book ‘Great Expectations’ by Charles Dickens which was a part of my school assignment for my upcoming literature examination. Upon hearing a scream coming from the garden, abruptly I felt a cold shudder running down my spine. I pounced up and rushed outside and opened the garden door. It was Chris. “Phew” I signed with relief as he was I saw Chris laughing hysterically whilst he frolicked about by jumping up and down in the brownish puddles of rain. Seeing me, he splashed water directly at me; the spray hit my face leaving tiny droplets on my lips. The heavy downpour was now accompanied by a very strong wind which started to lift my hair.
Thankyou,
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Sarah_92 When he screams, does it make sense when I write upon? Yes and where it says frolicked, is it the right tense? Yes Please would you check/improve it for me: Before I sat down again, I went to grab grabbed a book from the book shelf which was in the front room, as I reached for the book ‘Great Expectations’ by Charles Dickens , which was a part of my school assignment for my upcoming literature examination.
- Sarah_92 When he screams, does it make sense when I write upon?
- Yes and where it says frolicked, is it the right tense?
- Yes Please would you check/improve it for me: Before I sat down again, I went to grab grabbed a book from the book shelf which was in the front room, as I reached for the book ‘Great Expectations’ by Charles Dickens , which was a part of my school assignment for my upcoming literature examination.
- Upon hearing a scream coming from the garden, abruptly I felt a cold shudder running down my spine.
- I pounced leaped/jumped up and rushed outside and opened through the garden door.
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Sarah_92When he screams, does it make sense when I write upon? Yes and where it says frolicked, is it the right tense? Yes
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