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Kltakky Posted 23 years ago
Grammar

Please improve this

Dear all,

I would like to obtain your help on improving the sentence below :-

"The system will deliver the portal's content to registered user at stipulated intervals until the completion of the content."

This sentence shall mean the system will deliver the content for e.g. every 15 minutes until the transmission is completed.

Please help,,,,

*** for your reply!
  

Top answer

It's pretty good how it is. Users in plural or put an A before registered. I'm sure it was just a quick typo.

— Woodward

  • It's pretty good how it is.
  • Users in plural or put an A before registered.
  • I'm sure it was just a quick typo.
  • " Perhaps another possibility is: "The system will deliver the portal's content to registered users at stipulated intervals until the content has been completed/loaded...
  • " The last part depends on what happens to the content.
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It's pretty good how it is. Users in plural or put an A before registered. I'm sure it was just a quick typo.
"The system will deliver the portal's content to registered users at stipulated intervals until the completion of the content."
Perhaps another possibility is:
"The system will deliver the portal's content to registered users at stipulated intervals until the content has b
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Hi Woodward,

Thanks for the immediate reply. I feel grateful....

Truly appreciated your help!!
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