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Ratcha Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please improve my sentence.

1.We send some documents to you and waiting 4 sheets from transportation office and we will send them to you later.
2.For you question, we have re-check with transportation owner, The trucks that use move container from port to cold storage within 1 hour which have not electric generator because it is not far.
  

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This is how I would word it: 1. ] some of the documents to you. However, we are waiting for 4 sheets from the transportation office, which we will send to you later.

  • This is how I would word it: 1.
  • ] some of the documents to you.
  • However, we are waiting for 4 sheets from the transportation office, which we will send to you later.
  • 2.
  • As to your question: we have re-checked with the transportation owner.
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This is how I would word it:

1. We will send [or: already have sent?] some of the documents to you. However, we are waiting for 4 sheets from the transportation office, which we will send to you later.

2. As to your question: we have re-checked with the transportation owner. The trucks used to move the container from the port to cold storage, which should take less than an h
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Thank you very much Doctor D.

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