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Mitar Posted 12 years ago
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Dear Lywi,

If you have not send the original bill of landing to us within today, we can not move containers from port intime. Therefore, the line will charge electric to us, we will charge back to you.
  

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] to us by the end of today , we will not be able to move the containers from the port in time . ] will charge the electricity to us, and we will charge it back to you. This assumes that the connection between electricity and containers is obvious to the recipient.

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  • ] to us by the end of today , we will not be able to move the containers from the port in time .
  • ] will charge the electricity to us, and we will charge it back to you.
  • This assumes that the connection between electricity and containers is obvious to the recipient.
  • I have heard of "bill of lading " but not "bill of landing".
  • I assume "line" means "shipping line".
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This is my guess:

If you have not sent the original bill of landing [?] to us by the end of today, we will not be able to move the containers from the port in time. Therefore, the line [?] will charge the electricity to us, and we will charge it back to you.

This assumes that the connection betwee
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