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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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On Feb.14, we had produce product (flake) from salmon bone's raw material of container xxx. We found some pieces of metal in thawing process and when check finish goods with Metal detector.
Please note that this container, the salmon bone didnot cut the fish's tail.
Please note that this container, the salmon bone didnot cut the fish's tail.
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I really don't understand what you have explained, but I guess that it might be this: On February 14th, we examined flaked salmon bone from container #***. We found some fragments of metal during the thawing process when we checked the finish goods with a metal detector. Please note that in this container, the fish tails were not removed from the salmon bones.
- I really don't understand what you have explained, but I guess that it might be this: On February 14th, we examined flaked salmon bone from container #***.
- We found some fragments of metal during the thawing process when we checked the finish goods with a metal detector.
- Please note that in this container, the fish tails were not removed from the salmon bones.
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I really don't understand what you have explained, but I guess that it might be this:
On February 14th, we examined flaked salmon bone from container #***. We found some fragments of metal during the thawing process when we checked the finish goods with a metal detector. Please note that in this container, the fish tails were not removed from the salmon bones.
On February 14th, we examined flaked salmon bone from container #***. We found some fragments of metal during the thawing process when we checked the finish goods with a metal detector. Please note that in this container, the fish tails were not removed from the salmon bones.
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We are quite sure that the some fragments of metal to bring with salmon bone because we had not found it in our production line.
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We are quite sure that the fragments of metal were brought in with the salmon bone because we found none in our production line.
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