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“The bee is more honored than other animals, not because she labors, but because she labors for others” Saint John Chrysostom, Archbishop of Constantinople 347 to 40, says it. Saint John Chrysostom was famous for his eloquence preaching in public gatherings. Besides this, he was also known for his ascetic way of life. This quotation is a self-evident, in which the saint has discussed, the honeybee, and her labor for others. She is the symbol of scarifies and determination for ages.
The message, which the saint wants to deliver, is this, though in this world every one works for him, but those who work for others really appreciable. As men know that in the earth there are many species of animals, in which some serves to human being and some, are perilous for the men. However the saint assimilate the men with a honey bee, because there are some people in the world, who serves the humanity such as honeybee.

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“The bee is more honored than other animals, not because she labors, but because she labors for others” Saint John Chrysostom, Archbishop of Constantinople 347 to 40, says it. Saint John Chrysostom was famous for his eloquence preaching in public gatherings. Besides this, he was also known for his ascetic way of life. This quotation is a self-evident, in which the saint has discussed, the honeybee, and her labor for others. She is the symbol of scarifies and determination for ages.
The message, which the saint wants to deliver, is this, though in this world every one works for him, but those who work for others really appreciable. As men know that in the earth there are many species of animals, in which some serves to human being and some, are perilous for the men. However the saint assimilate the men with a honey bee, because there are some people in the world, who serves the humanity such as honeybee.

Adia Khan · Answer

“The bee is more honored than other animals, not because she labors, but because she labors for others,”Saint John Chrysostom (347-407), Archbishop of Constantinople, says this. Saint John Chrysostom was famous for his eloquence in preaching and public gatherings. Besides this, he was also known for his ascetic way of life. The meaning of the quotation is self-evident which is said by the Saint John. It is about the honeybee and her labor for others. She is the symbol of sacrifice and determination.
The message, which the saint wants to deliver, is, though in this world, everyone works for himself, but those who work for others are appreciable. As men know that on the earth there are many species of animals, in which some serve to human, and some are perilous for him. However, the saint assimilates the men with a honeybee, because there are some people in the world who serve humanity as like honeybee.

Mister Micawber · Answer

“The bee is more honored than other animals, not because she labors, but because she labors for others,” Saint John Chrysostom (347-407), Archbishop of Constantinople, says. St. John Chrysostom was famous for his eloquence in preaching at public gatherings. Besides this, he was also known for his ascetic way of life. The meaning of the quotation is self-evident. It is about the honeybee and her labor for others. She is the symbol of sacrifice and determination.

The message which the saint wants to deliver is that, though in this world almost everyone works for himself, those who work for others are appreciated (?). On the earth there are many species of animals, some which serve man and some which are perilous for him. However, the saint equates some men with a honeybee, because there are some people in the world who serve humanity as the honeybee does.

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