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Please, I'd need a quick advice on what I wrote
0 Hello, my name is Jenny and I'm from Italy, I have to write a very short essay about my motivation for an internship at UNESCO, I have a good knowledge of English but I would appreciate a proofread by a mother tongue, this is what I wrote: 02 br
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00 "As a student in International Relations, I learnt the importance of cooperation in many fields of human activities and I had the opportunity to approach to the work of United Nations and it's specialized agencies in the building of cooperation and peace issues. 02 br
00 The work of UNESCO, in particular, is much more valuable as far as it proposes cooperation in culture and education with an attentive eye on preserving the ethnical and traditional features of each people. 02 br
00 After years of study, I am now applying for an internship at UNESCO, this is a great opportunity for a young student and i am sure that working at UNESCO will provide me not only with a professional experience in an international, prestigious organisation but will also be a personal enrichment allowing me to work in a multicultural, open-minded, dynamic environment." 0-
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00 "As a student in International Relations, I learnt the importance of cooperation in many fields of human activities and I had the opportunity to approach to the work of United Nations and it's specialized agencies in the building of cooperation and peace issues. 02 br
00 The work of UNESCO, in particular, is much more valuable as far as it proposes cooperation in culture and education with an attentive eye on preserving the ethnical and traditional features of each people. 02 br
00 After years of study, I am now applying for an internship at UNESCO, this is a great opportunity for a young student and i am sure that working at UNESCO will provide me not only with a professional experience in an international, prestigious organisation but will also be a personal enrichment allowing me to work in a multicultural, open-minded, dynamic environment." 0-
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0 As a student in International Relations, I learned the importance of cooperation in many fields of human activities, and I had the opportunity to approach to the work of United Nations and its specialized agencies in the building of cooperation and peace issues. I value the work of UNESCO in particular for its cooperative approach to culture and education, while keeping an attentive eye on preserving the ethnical and traditional features of each people. After years of study, I am now applying for an internship at UNESCO.
- 0 As a student in International Relations, I learned the importance of cooperation in many fields of human activities, and I had the opportunity to approach to the work of United Nations and its specialized agencies in the building of cooperation and peace issues.
- I value the work of UNESCO in particular for its cooperative approach to culture and education, while keeping an attentive eye on preserving the ethnical and traditional features of each people.
- After years of study, I am now applying for an internship at UNESCO.
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0 As a student in International Relations, I learned the importance of cooperation in many fields of human activities, and I had the opportunity to approach to the work of United Nations and its specialized agencies in the building of cooperation and peace issues. I value the work of UNESCO in particular for its cooperative approach to culture and education, while keeping an attentive eye on pres
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