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Katya LARA Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Please I would like to know if my letter is Ok.

Hi guys!!! I'm Kate
sorry for disturbing you. I'm writing a covering letter because I'm looking for job, I would be very grateful if you can take a look of this two paragraphs please.Thank you very much.

My work in the consular section was interesting, I have to learn the french institutions rules outside related to migration and I have to deal with the work manner and relationship of indian and french staff. I learnt a lot about the different types of visa and migration, but also about the different kind of people who emigrated in India. The good relationship with my colleagues in the consulate help us to face difficult situations in high season when we received many applications or we have to delivery passports a student's or diplomatic group.

I'm someone that adapts easily to any work environment, I had worked with people from a wide range of cultural and linguistic background. I like the multicultural contacts and I enjoy learning and giving clerical support.

Please find my resume attached for further details.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards,
  

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I enjoyed my job in consular section. I had to learn French institution's rules related to migration. I have to deal with the work manner and relationship of indian and french staff..

  • I enjoyed my job in consular section.
  • I had to learn French institution's rules related to migration.
  • I have to deal with the work manner and relationship of indian and french staff..
  • This line is not clear to me ..
  • you can rewrite it.
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I enjoyed my job in consular section. I had to learn French institution's rules related to migration.

I have to deal with the work manner and relationship of indian and french staff.. This line is not clear to me .. you can rewrite it.
I have learnt a lot about different types of visa and migration related issues including migrants in India. ..

he good relationship with my

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