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Almatykiz Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

Please i would be happy if someone will check my letter and find mistakes,,

0 00Dear Sir/Madame,00 00 00I am writing in order to apply for the International relations and Diplomacy master program at your University. I am currently studying International Relations at the 00 of 00 and world languages after Ablay khan in 00 . My major is International relations. I will graduate with my "Diplom" degree in June 2008. To deepen my knowledge and to specialize in the field of International Relations , I intend to do my Master of Business. During my summer 00 00studies at the Cankaya University in Ankara, Turkey 00 00I already gained some theoretical background about international relations, for example in the course “Theory of International relations " or "American Foreign Policy". 00 00My career goal is to work in an international organization where this Master degree would be helpful. I am interested in traveling and getting to know different cultures and people from various countries around the world.00 00I am looking forward to receiving the opportunity to study at your university and to make a great contribution to the international relations and diplomacy community.00Thank you very much for your consideration. 00Yours Sincerely,02br
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02br 02br 00Dear Sir/Madame,00 00 00I am writing 01del 00in order02del 00 to apply for the International relations and Diplomacy master program at your University. I am currently studying 01del 00International Relations02del 00 at the 01del 00University of International relations and world languages at after Ablay khan02del 00 01b 00Ablay Khan University of International Relations and World Languages 02b 00in Almaty, Kazakhstan . My major is International relations.

  • 02br 02br 00Dear Sir/Madame,00 00 00I am writing 01del 00in order02del 00 to apply for the International relations and Diplomacy master program at your University.
  • I am currently studying 01del 00International Relations02del 00 at the 01del 00University of International relations and world languages at after Ablay khan02del 00 01b 00Ablay Khan University of International Relations and World Languages 02b 00in Almaty, Kazakhstan .
  • My major is International relations.
  • I will graduate with my "Diplom" degree in June 2008.
  • To deepen my knowledge and to specialize in the field of International Relations I intend to obtain a 01del 00do02del 00 01del 00my02del 00 Master of Business 01b 00degree02b 00.
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0 00For what they're worth here are my comments.02br
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00Dear Sir/Madame,00 00 00I am writing 01del00in order02del00 to apply for the International relations and Diplomacy master program at your University. I am currently studying 01del00International Relations02del00 at the 01del00Universit
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00I would like to say a lot of thanks for checking the letter. Millions od thanks.05002h1

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