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Jess Katz Posted 13 years ago
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Please ! I need your help

I have a new job offer but im stuck with my current job

Letter ,

Dear sir,

Thank you very much for your concern. I checked with the human resource department within the hotel. Unforunately, They told me you have to complete more 4-month in order to to able to move. Also they are keeping my employment visa.

I`m so interested in sales as a long life career which I am practising different kind of sales method to upsell the hotel rooms and apartments.I h ave attached my resume and photos for your reference.

Thanks
  

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Hello, Jess, my dear friend. How are you? Here let me see if I can't help you a bit.

— Cynthia3754

  • Hello, Jess, my dear friend.
  • How are you?
  • Here let me see if I can't help you a bit.
  • Dear sir, Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter.
  • I checked with the human resources department in the hotel, unfortunately they told me I have to complete four more months in order to to able to move.
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Hello, Jess, my dear friend. How are you? Here let me see if I can't help you a bit.

Dear sir,

Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter. I checked with the huma
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Not so carefully done, Cynthia.

Dear Mr [surname],

Thank you very much for your concern/consideration. [Without more explanation of the message you are answering, a word choice cannot be made, Jess.] Unfortunately, the human resources department of the hotel has told me that I must complete four more months in order to be able to
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A couple of small things:
Jess KatzI`m
Be sure not to confuse the grave accent ( ` ) with the apostrophe ( ' ), which is the proper punctuation mark for contractions and possessives. The apostrophe key is right next to the Enter key.

Also,

I have attached my resume and photos for your review and will be glad to supply any addit
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Thank you very much. indeed , I am fine , Always busy with the work. How about you ? I hope with all my heart that youre fine and doing well
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Hi Jess where are you now?
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