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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
PLEASE: I need your help!
For my English course at university, we have to write an essay about achieving personal happiness. This essay will therefore be the deciding factor whether I'm failing the course or not. I'm just posting the first paragraph, maybe you could at my other paragraphs also? (which would be very kind!)
In order to achieve personal happiness, values like family and friendship increasingly become important, whereas issues such as health, wealth and work are considered less essential. Upon closer consideration, there can be no doubt that family, friends and other social contacts play a major role in achieving personal happiness. Still, those values do not guarantee a life in well-ordered circumstances.
In order to achieve personal happiness, values like family and friendship increasingly become important, whereas issues such as health, wealth and work are considered less essential. Upon closer consideration, there can be no doubt that family, friends and other social contacts play a major role in achieving personal happiness. Still, those values do not guarantee a life in well-ordered circumstances.
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In order to achieve personal happiness, values like f amily and friendship increasingly (compared to what? ) become important, whereas issues such as health, wealth and work are considered less essential. Upon closer consideration, there can be no doubt that family, friends and other social contacts play a major role in achieving personal happiness.
- In order to achieve personal happiness, values like f amily and friendship increasingly (compared to what?
- ) become important, whereas issues such as health, wealth and work are considered less essential.
- Upon closer consideration, there can be no doubt that family, friends and other social contacts play a major role in achieving personal happiness.
- Still, those values do not guarantee a life in well-ordered circumstances.
- ) Family is not a value.
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In order to achieve personal happiness, values like family and friendship increasingly (compared to what? Were these not important in the past?) become important, whereas issues such as health, wealth and work are considered less essential. Upon closer consideration, there can be no doubt that family, friends and other social contacts play a major role in achieving per
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Hello! First of all, thank you for your help!
I used the word "issue" because it was also mentioned in the task: "Issues such as work and wealth take second place." Can I still use the word "issue" then? Because "issue" also means "aspect, topic".
In the last sentence, I tried to say that "family and friendship" won't help you a lot when you lie in your bed because of a severe illness, wh
I used the word "issue" because it was also mentioned in the task: "Issues such as work and wealth take second place." Can I still use the word "issue" then? Because "issue" also means "aspect, topic".
In the last sentence, I tried to say that "family and friendship" won't help you a lot when you lie in your bed because of a severe illness, wh
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