Please I need your comment for my motivation letter

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00I am about to prepare my applications for some Universities in the 010200. 02br
00Then I just found this website and registered here. I need help for writing my motivation letter. I asked myself, if I just could post my prepared letter on this forum and you can give some comments about it. That is why I post it here. How do you get you comments after that? My email address is 01a00Email Removed00">01span00Email Removed02span02a00 or 01a00Email Removed00">01span00Email Removed02span02a02br
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00I hope you will reply soon. 02br
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00I am writing to you to apply for the masters Degree in Economics in your University.02br
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00My aim is to work in an international field related to Economics. Therefore I would like to gain a deeper theoretical knowledge in Economics.02br
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00I hold four year bachelor degree in economics from 00, in a year 2005 with outstanding grade being one of distinction student. I am now working in Association of Ethiopian Microfinance Institutions being A/Research officer.02br
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00I have been seeking to be professional Economist since I were studying my undergraduate program. For that I have been planning to acquire genuine knowledge through learning but I was restricted to do so due to lack of enough opportunities here in my country and s00cholarships 00opportunities for learning abroad. 02br
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00Always, I seek out opportunities to further improve and test my skills. I also want to constantly keep learning and discover things. This can help me to be commutative and innovative.02br
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00I have got chance to contact various Economic professional, professors, and higher university students through international Conferences and Workshops. My contact with them increases my desire to learn further for acquiring authentic knowledge and practical skill in the area in which I engage. To make a difference, bring novel ideas and improvements in my work, I have been searching opportunities for MSC program in which I can widen my academic knowledge and practical skills. 02br
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00To realize my ambitions explained above Queen Mary University of London is good place for me. I can benefit from the University’s professional lecturers, reputation in the field, specialized libraries, seminars and links to many of world leading Economists.02br
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00A Compellation of this Masters Degree in your school will be an excellent spring board for my future career and will provide me the knowledge, confidence and contacts to realize my dreams. Furthermore, the courses this program combines match perfectly with my academic expectations.02br
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00I hope that you have a picture of me and my motives to come to Qeen Marry University of London.I would gladly give you a more detailed view orally or written, if you want . 02br
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00Thank you for considering my application and looking forward to your positive reply.02br
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00Yours faithfully,02br
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00Tigist W/tsadik Sommeno 02br
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