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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Please I need some corrections/additions on this memo. Thanks you!

Please be informed that all maintenance staff are entitled for 30 days maximum leave regardless of years worked. Beyond the limit will not be accepted by the management as it affects production flow due to numerous machine breakdowns unattended.
Please be guided accordingly.
  

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Here's one possible version: Please note that all maintenance staff are entitled to 30 days maximum leave regardless of years worked. Management cannot accept requests beyond this limit as production flow is affected when machine breakdowns are left unattended. Please plan accordingly.

  • Here's one possible version: Please note that all maintenance staff are entitled to 30 days maximum leave regardless of years worked.
  • Management cannot accept requests beyond this limit as production flow is affected when machine breakdowns are left unattended.
  • Please plan accordingly.
  • CJ
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Here's one possible version:

Please note that all maintenance staff are entitled to 30 days maximum leave regardless of years worked. Management cannot accept requests beyond this limit as production flow is affected when machine breakdowns are left unattended. Please plan accordingly.

CJ

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