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Narmina Posted 17 years ago
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Please, I know, it's a bit long...but I need somebody's, who is perfect in English, help with my CL!***


(I don't know where I've made more mistakes, in which part, but I guess there(PINK) I have used a lot of online translators but it only confused me... , THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR PAYING ATTENTION!!!!

Dear Sirs,



I would like to ask you to afford me the opportunity to pass a practical training in your company in the Marketing department. The theme of my Diploma Work is: The tendencies in development of Moldovan and Russian advertising markets. I have high results on the subject of Marketing and International Marketing and I find these subjects very interesting and I think that knowledge I received through the means of theory studied is extremely useful for better understanding of any company’s objectives, possibilities and elaboration with further successful implementation of business strategy. I have studied these disciplines in English, as well as a number of other subjects: Bases of Management, International Management, Business correspondence, Logistics, International Trade and others (Here I mentioned only those, that I consider mostly appropriate to the theme of my Diploma Work and the desired practical training). Also I should make some considerations about my work experience; I had worked in the advertising agency for a one month as a designer of outdoor advertising. The main purpose I pursued was the recognition of advertising process from inside. Due to my skills of work in Adobe Photoshop I managed to work with creation of visual advertising and to communicate with customers for better understanding of their wishes. The short period of my work experience there is explained by my theoretical academic studies: I study in English and Romanian, not in my native language therefore I need more time to adapt material.

I am very interested in work in international company because I think that it mostly corresponds to my specialization: International Economic Relations. I think that in Moldcell company- the biggest GSM operator, which uses foreign experience and international approaches for advertising and running business, such as customer oriented strategy, I can gain the very important experience needed for specialist of my profile.

Please find attached my curriculum vitae.

Thank you very much for your time and consideration.





I will be grateful to hear from you soon.








  

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My english is much less than perfect, but until one comes along, perhaps: Dear Sir, I like an opportunity for a practical training in your company at the Marketing department. " (I am only guessing your title. Please ask someone to translate the title correctly) I have a high score in the subject of Marketing and International Marketing, and I find this subject very interesting.

  • My english is much less than perfect, but until one comes along, perhaps: Dear Sir, I like an opportunity for a practical training in your company at the Marketing department.
  • " (I am only guessing your title.
  • Please ask someone to translate the title correctly) I have a high score in the subject of Marketing and International Marketing, and I find this subject very interesting.
  • The theoretical knowledge I received from this subject is useful to better understand a company’s objectives, possibilities, and implementation of a business strategy.
  • My course was conducted in English, and I took subjects such as Bases of Management, International Management, Business correspondence, Logistics, International Trade.
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My english is much less than perfect, but until one comes along, perhaps:
Dear Sir,

I like an opportunity for a practical training in your company at the Marketing department. The title of my Diploma is "The development trends in the Moldovan and Russian advertising markets." (I am only guessing your title. Please ask someone to translate the title correctly)
I have a high

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