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We have been disappointed with the way you dealt with Mr. Alex's employment issue. We have told you many times that please don't take this matter negligently as he is in a big financial crisis and he needs a job  urgently. Also, we have requested you to make sure that the test and interview should be done accordingly because he is coming here only for that. But nothing has been done. It was a mistake that we trusted you. You have simply tried to clarify your genuinity in this matter. We understand that it was happened to your inability to make things clearer. After that, we tried to contact you many times but you didn't answer our calls so we strongly believe that something is phishing in this matter. However, he is leaving for his home country this week. It was a truly waste of time and money. Please don't give any hope to anyone unless you have a confident in the matter and please don't do this to anyone again.

KhoshtipMan · Accepted Answer

I'd use these changes:

Anonymousas since he is in a big

Anonymousbecause he is was coming

Anonymousyour ~~genuinity~~ gentrice

Anonymoussomething is phishing in this matter.

I don't know why phishing!

Anonymoushave a are confident

Vic Z · Answer

I don't think much would be gained by sending this letter even if it was written in perfect English, which it certainly is not. The recipient is most likely to either just throw it away, or may initiate some sort of reprisals against you or your company. There must be a more practical way of being compensated for the way your friend was treated. Is some form of legal redress possible? Is there a trade association or union that could help? If you must write, I suggest you stick to listing the facts and if possible make constructive suggestions that could be well received. I hope this helps.

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