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China Queen Buffet
The servers take the customers' orders, give the customers orders to the kitchen staff, and served the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the customers, and gives them their silverware. The customers talked to each other while eating their food.
•?There were approximately 40 people in the restaurant.
•?I was at the restaurant at approximately five p.m.
•It was quiet and the restaurant was clean.
1B. Safe Haven Daycare
•The customers gave the children a snack and cleaned the daycare. The children ate their snack and watched cartoons.
•?There were approximately 25 people in the daycare.
•?I was at the daycare at four p.m.
•The daycare was noisy.
1C. Cooks Barbershop
•?The barbers cut the customers hair while telling jokes. The customers sat waiting for their turn to get their haircut.
•?There were approximately nine people in the barbershop.
•I was at the barbershop around seven p.m.
•?It was very relaxing and the barbers were very entertaining.
2. Cooks Barbershop
• I was at the barbershop at approximately eight p.m. There were exactly 10 people in the barbershop. The type of voices that I heard was all from male adults and teenagers. A customer and I discussed football and basketball teams while I overheard barbers and other customers discussing why Barack Obama will be reelected.
3. Erika Fuller
• She is 20 years old
• She is currently in college.
• She is Single.
• She has one child.
She comes to the China Queen Buffet at least one time a week because it is where she met her husband, who is now dead.
• The main issue that concerns her is global warming because she believes that it will affect our future in several different ways.
• She has changed her mind on the issue and believes that Global Warming is not a threat to her future.
The servers take the customers' orders, give the customers orders to the kitchen staff, and served the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the customers, and gives them their silverware. The customers talked to each other while eating their food.
•?There were approximately 40 people in the restaurant.
•?I was at the restaurant at approximately five p.m.
•It was quiet and the restaurant was clean.
1B. Safe Haven Daycare
•The customers gave the children a snack and cleaned the daycare. The children ate their snack and watched cartoons.
•?There were approximately 25 people in the daycare.
•?I was at the daycare at four p.m.
•The daycare was noisy.
1C. Cooks Barbershop
•?The barbers cut the customers hair while telling jokes. The customers sat waiting for their turn to get their haircut.
•?There were approximately nine people in the barbershop.
•I was at the barbershop around seven p.m.
•?It was very relaxing and the barbers were very entertaining.
2. Cooks Barbershop
• I was at the barbershop at approximately eight p.m. There were exactly 10 people in the barbershop. The type of voices that I heard was all from male adults and teenagers. A customer and I discussed football and basketball teams while I overheard barbers and other customers discussing why Barack Obama will be reelected.
3. Erika Fuller
• She is 20 years old
• She is currently in college.
• She is Single.
• She has one child.
She comes to the China Queen Buffet at least one time a week because it is where she met her husband, who is now dead.
• The main issue that concerns her is global warming because she believes that it will affect our future in several different ways.
• She has changed her mind on the issue and believes that Global Warming is not a threat to her future.
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OK, I have done so: 1A. China Queen Buffet The servers take the customers' orders, give the customers orders to the kitchen staff, and served the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the custom ers, a nd gives them their silverware.
- OK, I have done so: 1A.
- China Queen Buffet The servers take the customers' orders, give the customers orders to the kitchen staff, and served the customers their drinks.
- The hostess seats the custom ers, a nd gives them their silverware.
- The customers talked to each other while eating their food .
- There were approximately 40 people in the restaurant.
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OK, I have done so:
1A. China Queen Buffet
The servers take the customers' orders, give the customers orders to the kitchen staff, and served the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the customers, and gives them their silverware. The customers talked to each other while eating their food.
•?There were approximat
1A. China Queen Buffet
The servers take the customers' orders, give the customers orders to the kitchen staff, and served the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the customers, and gives them their silverware. The customers talked to each other while eating
•?There were approximat
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China Queen Buffet- Pineville LA.
The servers take the customers' orders, give the customer orders to the kitchen staff, and serves the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the customers and gives them their silverware. The customers talks to each other while eating their food.
•?There were approximately 40 people in the restaurant.
•?I was at the restaurant at approximately five
The servers take the customers' orders, give the customer orders to the kitchen staff, and serves the customers their drinks. The hostess seats the customers and gives them their silverware. The customers talks to each other while eating their food.
•?There were approximately 40 people in the restaurant.
•?I was at the restaurant at approximately five
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