Please hep me check: Ielt Speaking Part 2 Script

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I am very happy and thankful for that ))

Question: can you describe a situation when you celebrate your achievement ?

Answer: Well, let me think a little, I ‘m going to tell you about the backdrop I celebrated with my friend, who I work with in the same company. He is also a cousin with the same age as me that I often spend time hanging out with. I remember right, that was on September 9, 2019, a very special and interesting day, I received some bounty from my boss for overrunning the job well. I invited my friend to attend a crowded music performance in the city center. We took the bus and talked together when we went to the show. I woke up very early although I stayed up late last night. I was very sleepy but I tried to wake up to him for fear of missing out. He was late for the appointment but he was able to apologize to me in time, which also made me down in the dumps. I lied that it was okay and I was willing to condone him but I was really sick and tired of him because I waited so long for her. When coming to the performance, we wore the same outfit , the same kind of uniform when we were in the same company. After the trip, we went home and the two of us cooked to prepare a fun meal. In the end, we invited each other to play table tennis and I won against her. He was the one who taught me to play table tennis. I once declared that I would win him one day. it was a big challenge that I thought I couldn't do, winning him that day plus celebrating my company's accomplishments made me nearly sleepless that night because I was elated, All of us played table tennis almost all night long, that night I felt fatigued but it was really fun, and a lot of strange feelings that I will never dismiss from mind

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