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Elmoleung Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Please help!!!URGENT>< music review!
Hello, I am writing a music review , and my English gammar is very poor, I hope u guys can give me some opinions and correct all the mistake><
thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!
Avril Lavigne, a 20 years old Canadian singer, has a voice that is unmistakable and very listenable. My first impression is that the album” Under my skin” is a relatively commercial pop song. Nonetheless, it is very noticeable that she is changing from her previous music.
She has already exhibited musical skills that far exceed other teen pop star peers. As for her musical style, I was very impressed. She pens her own songs, plays guitar in the accompanying instrumentals, and the range of her voice is so large that she can shift from rage to naive coyness effortlessly.She writes clear lyrics and sings them with a clear and underscores it all with some terrific guitar. I've never ceased to be amazed at her talent. She does a better job of utilizing that talent on this album than on any others that she did. The album is a must-buy item has for pop and rock fans alike.
One of my favourite break-up ballads, and one which exemplifies her originality, is "My Happy ending". It takes some lively percussion somewhere between acoustic and electronic, lots of acoustic guitar rock in a song. It is a totally awesome rock song. Almost every instrumental sound comes straight from the guitar and drum, with limited keyboard, and a trumpet or two. And the song is about a girl always looking back to the past after a break-up. It is awesome that she uses a variety of styles, straight-shooting lyrics, and a generally fun atmosphere in the song.
"Under my skin" is a wonderful collection of Avril Lavigne 's best work, and it is definitely a worthwhile addition to any audiophile's collections. Even if you don't like the musical style, this one's worth it just for the uplifting spirit.
thanks a lot!!!!!!!!!
Avril Lavigne, a 20 years old Canadian singer, has a voice that is unmistakable and very listenable. My first impression is that the album” Under my skin” is a relatively commercial pop song. Nonetheless, it is very noticeable that she is changing from her previous music.
She has already exhibited musical skills that far exceed other teen pop star peers. As for her musical style, I was very impressed. She pens her own songs, plays guitar in the accompanying instrumentals, and the range of her voice is so large that she can shift from rage to naive coyness effortlessly.She writes clear lyrics and sings them with a clear and underscores it all with some terrific guitar. I've never ceased to be amazed at her talent. She does a better job of utilizing that talent on this album than on any others that she did. The album is a must-buy item has for pop and rock fans alike.
One of my favourite break-up ballads, and one which exemplifies her originality, is "My Happy ending". It takes some lively percussion somewhere between acoustic and electronic, lots of acoustic guitar rock in a song. It is a totally awesome rock song. Almost every instrumental sound comes straight from the guitar and drum, with limited keyboard, and a trumpet or two. And the song is about a girl always looking back to the past after a break-up. It is awesome that she uses a variety of styles, straight-shooting lyrics, and a generally fun atmosphere in the song.
"Under my skin" is a wonderful collection of Avril Lavigne 's best work, and it is definitely a worthwhile addition to any audiophile's collections. Even if you don't like the musical style, this one's worth it just for the uplifting spirit.
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Hi elmoleung, Overall, well written. I have made some comments here and there. You can still do some minor tuning.
- Hi elmoleung, Overall, well written.
- I have made some comments here and there.
- You can still do some minor tuning.
- I am not rewriting your essay.
- Rather I am just looking for gaffes.
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Hi elmoleung,
Overall, well written. I have made some comments here and there. You can still do some minor tuning. I am not rewriting your essay. Rather I am just looking for gaffes. So the phrases and words that you use are your own. How you teacher grades your essay will depend upon his or her expectations.
MountainHiker
Avril Lavigne, a 20 yea
Overall, well written. I have made some comments here and there. You can still do some minor tuning. I am not rewriting your essay. Rather I am just looking for gaffes. So the phrases and words that you use are your own. How you teacher grades your essay will depend upon his or her expectations.
MountainHiker
Avril Lavigne, a 20 yea
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She writes clear lyrics and underscores the lyrics with terrific guitar playing.
Can u get the meaning?><
It takes lively percussion somewhere between acoustic and electronic, and it takes lots of acoustic guitar rock in a song. <--that is the meaning I want to say, is it better ?easier to undestand?
thanks for yr reply!
Can u get the meaning?><
It takes lively percussion somewhere between acoustic and electronic, and it takes lots of acoustic guitar rock in a song. <--that is the meaning I want to say, is it better ?easier to undestand?
thanks for yr reply!
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elmoleung,
"She writes clear lyrics and underscores the lyrics with terrific guitar playing." That I can understand, sort of.
" It takes lively percussion somewhere between acoustic and electronic, and it takes lots of acoustic guitar rock in a song."
I don't get it, but maybe that is just me. "lots of acoustic guitar rock?" Put yourself in your teacher's shoes. We
"She writes clear lyrics and underscores the lyrics with terrific guitar playing." That I can understand, sort of.
" It takes lively percussion somewhere between acoustic and electronic, and it takes lots of acoustic guitar rock in a song."
I don't get it, but maybe that is just me. "lots of acoustic guitar rock?" Put yourself in your teacher's shoes. We
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