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By the end I should mention that there is no graudated MSc or PhD study in ......my home university. recently when I was talking with some of professors about which programme could be useful for my country if I apply, they strongly recommend me that I may choose programme which we donot have in higher education in it will be certainly helpful in improvement of higher education in my country.

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Saba

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

please I am wiating for  a favour ......

Nona the brit · Answer

I'm not too sure what all this is about - is it just part of a letter? anyway my suggestions are in red.

By the end (By the end makes no sense, do you mean by the way? Not really suitable for a formal letter though).I should mention that there is no graudated (spelling)MSc or PhD study at ......my home university. recently when I was talking with some of my professors about which programme would ultimately be useful for my country and my future career, they strongly recommended that I study abroad as we do not have higher education in my country. (I don't understand the point you are making in your final sentence)

Thanks

Saba

Anonymous · Answer

Tank you very very much for your help.

I had some paragraphs in my motivation letter for appling a MSc programme .by the end it was last ones that I wanted to express that how this cousre would be important to my country or my future career.

Saba

Anonymous · Answer

Dear nona the birt many thanks for your useful comments

saba

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