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Vy Lê 1626 Posted 6 years ago
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Please helping me to check my grammar mistakes

Hi teacher. I used an app called Grammarly to check the grammar, however, I still don't know if my writing has any mistakes :> So, please help me to correct it. Thank you!

Why Vietnam should learn Marketing Industry from Korean?

I already watch a new Youtube video post from one of my favourite channel called Qpark. Nearly 8.5M followers, it's cool, isn't it?

Back to a few days ago, I just watched some videos were made by Korean guys who speak Vietnamese very well. They also have a lot of fans. Then, I think about how Kpop way impacts on our generations. I know how to say thank you, sorry, I love u in Korean. Hanbok is a Korean traditional dress. I exactly know what's the concept of a family-owned business conglomerate called Chaebol which have also played a significant role in South Korean politics, etc,...

I'm a girl. The girl is the target customer of the cosmetic industry. As you may know, Korean cosmetics represents high-quality goods which are always represented by Kpop idols.

What a perfect circle Korean Marketing Industry do!

  

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How many changes did you make to your writing by correcting what Grammarly found? None? Are you only comparing what a native speaker finds with what Grammarly finds?

  • How many changes did you make to your writing by correcting what Grammarly found?
  • None?
  • Are you only comparing what a native speaker finds with what Grammarly finds?
  • Vy Lê 1626 Why Vietnam should learn Marketing Industry from Korean?
  • It is a very bad title.
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How many changes did you make to your writing by correcting what Grammarly found?
None?
Are you only comparing what a native speaker finds with what Grammarly finds?

Vy Lê 1626Why Vietnam should learn Marketing Industry from Korean?

It is a very bad title. It is not a question form.

Which Korean person is teaching this?

Market

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