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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Please help with two sentences, thanks

It is disappointed that we have requested the outstanding payment many times but still no one reply until today. Have you updated your system? Please immediately to clear up the payment and advise the payment date. Our bank is asking for the late commission The goods wiil be planned deliver / delivery on 19 June 2012
  

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It is disappointing that, while we have requested the outstanding payment many times, we have received no reply. Have you updated your system? Please immediately advise us of the payment date and clear the payment in question.

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  • It is disappointing that, while we have requested the outstanding payment many times, we have received no reply.
  • Have you updated your system?
  • Please immediately advise us of the payment date and clear the payment in question.
  • Our bank is asking for commission as a result of lateness.
  • The planned delivery of goods will be on 19 June 2012.
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It is disappointing that, while we have requested the outstanding payment many times, we have received no reply. Have you updated your system? Please immediately advise us of the payment date and clear the payment in question. Our bank is asking for commission as a result of lateness. The planned delivery of goods will be on 19 June 2012.

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