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Szfreaky Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Please help with this proof reading job!

'It is not so much that individuals set out to creat a culture when they interact in relationships, groups, organizations or societies, but rather than that cultures are a natural by-product of social interaction.'

In this sentence there is one mistake (I think it probably has to do with 'but rather than that', am I right?). Please help. THANKS!
  

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Szfreaky It is not so much that individuals set out to cre ate a culture when they interact in relationships, groups, organizations or societies, but rather than that cultures are a natural by-product of social interaction. See corrections.

— Teechr

  • Szfreaky It is not so much that individuals set out to cre ate a culture when they interact in relationships, groups, organizations or societies, but rather than that cultures are a natural by-product of social interaction.
  • See corrections.
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SzfreakyIt is not so much that individuals set out to create a culture when they interact in relationships, groups, organizations or societies, but rather than that cultures are a natural by-product of social interaction.
See corrections.
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Thanks teechr!Is it also correct to render the sentence in the follwoing way? It is not so much that individuals set out to create a culture when they interact in relationships, groups, organizations or societies; rather cultures are a natural by-product of social interaction.
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