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Mhproductions Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Please help with the text of my new website

Hello,

I am sort of new here and my English is not top class. However, I am working on my new website and I have written a few (I guess 4 or 5) small pieces of text that I would like to ask you to go over.

I that is possible? It would be very helpful as it is kind of my business card. The text is a little informal but that is okay. The site its purpose is to show my work, I am a web and graphic designer.

Thank you very much for checking my website!! The web address is [removed by mod] (There are only 4 pages!)

With Kind Regards,

Maarten van den Heuvel
  

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MH - I could not find 4 pages at your site. The intro needs to be a bit more "catchy". Welcome to my online portfolio.

  • MH - I could not find 4 pages at your site.
  • The intro needs to be a bit more "catchy".
  • Welcome to my online portfolio.
  • Let me introduce myself.
  • My name is Maarten van den Heuvel ; my friends call me MH.
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MH - I could not find 4 pages at your site. The intro needs to be a bit more "catchy".

Welcome to my online portfolio. Let me introduce myself. My name is Maarten van den Heuvel; my friends call me MH. My passion is making incredible web site designs with brilliant graphics. Webdesign and graphics are my passions something I have become very p
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Thank you very much for checking my homepage. The menu to the other pages is in the top right corner. However, I have posted all text elements below. Thank you so much!

Welcome

Welcome to my online portfolio. My name is Maarten van den Heuvel - or MH. Webdesign and graphics are something I have become very passionate about over the recent years. It is what we see and use ev
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Hi and welcome to EnglishForward!
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No prob. All of your (nine!) duplicate posts have gone.
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Thank you.

Someone else who would like to review my small pieces of text. I would be very thankful. I really need these to be outstanding!

Thank you very much!

With Kind Regards,

Maarten

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