Please help with my motivation letter

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00can someon please review my motivation letter and give me some feedback please.02br
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00the background for this letter:02br
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00i want to apply for master degree jointly offered by ABC university and DEF university. ABC university is my almamater whereas DEF is a university in Germany. i am currently working in XYZ company.02br
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00thanks for the help02br
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00Ricky02br
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00MOTIVATION LETTER:02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam:02br
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00I am writing in support of my application for the Master of Science Degree in Integrated Circuit Design.02br
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00I graduated in July 2003 from ABC University with a first class honor degree in Electrical and Electronics Engineering. During my study, I was exposed to the basic principle of electronics engineering which was very excited me. Driven with the passion for digital integrated circuit design, I specialized myself in integrated circuit design for my final year courses as well as my final year project. I managed to perform academically well during my 4 years study which help me secure a first class honor degree.02br
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00Upon graduation, I joined XYZ, one of the well known integrated circuit design company, which gives me an opportunity to apply my knowledge in real life application. In my work, I am responsible to design and characterize complex modules to fulfill customer expectations. With my huge perseverance level and good problem solving skills, I manage to deliver a high quality result in every areas of my work. As a team player, I have been involved in various projects and have been performing well because of my good adaptation skill.02br
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00Having been in integrated circuit design industry for more than 2 years, I came to realize that my knowledge is still limited in many areas. Thus, I decided to pursue a Master of Science degree in ABC-DEF to strengthen my knowledge. I have read through the course descriptions which are offered and I believe that your top level program can benefit me in many areas. Moreover, the opportunity to study at two reputable universities gives me an invaluable benefit to gain expert knowledge from various experts. I have already known some well known professors in ABC University which I would like to work with. Some more, DEF university, has been known for its excellent research activities and the fact that Germany is famous for its integrated circuit design industry are very appealing to me.02br
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00Obtaining a quality Master of Science degree from ABC-DEF will not only strengthen my knowledge in the field to cope with the fast advancement in technology but will also help me to fulfill my dream to be an effective and efficient integrated circuit design engineer capable to perform various tasks. I will also gain a different perspective to integrated circuit design industry from business point of view which will equip me to be a capable project manager.02br
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00With my strong academic background and relevant working experience, I am confident that I am qualified and able to perform well in this program. I also believe that I can make significant contribution to this program.02br
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00Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response.02br
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00Yours sincerely,02br
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00Ricky0-