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Dear ABC, As per the contract I signed on X Y, Z, the start working date was on X Y, Z. However, as per our conversation on the phone last Thursday, the start working date was changed till further notice from you. Now, I am wondering when I can expect to start working? Note: Please send me a copy of my signed contract.
  

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Dear xxxxxx, The contract I signed on xxxxxxxx specified my date to start work was xxxxxxxxxx. However, in our phone conversation last Thursday, you said this date was cancelled untill further notice from you. I am very eager to start my new job, so please advise me as soon as possible of my new start date.

  • Dear xxxxxx, The contract I signed on xxxxxxxx specified my date to start work was xxxxxxxxxx.
  • However, in our phone conversation last Thursday, you said this date was cancelled untill further notice from you.
  • I am very eager to start my new job, so please advise me as soon as possible of my new start date.
  • I would also be grateful for a revised copy of my original contract.
  • Yours sincerely, xxxxxxxx
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Dear xxxxxx,

The contract I signed on xxxxxxxx specified my date to start work was xxxxxxxxxx. However, in our phone conversation last Thursday, you said this date was cancelled untill further notice from you.

I am very eager to start my new job, so please advise me as soon as possible of my new start date. I would also be grateful for a revised copy of my original contract.

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